Lunch time post

OK, so I know I said I wouldn’t be posting for the next couple of days, but I got really bored and work, and HAD to write these two poems down.
Tell me what you think

cold and lonely
Time seems to stop as I lay here
Between this world and the next
eyes fluttering, longing for the dark
longing for the sleep that will not come
In between two worlds, torn apart by each
This world is real, yet so lonely
The next world–happy, yet fake
Gazing into the distance the thoughts come
Visions entice my mind, Apparitions entice my heart
eyes fluttering, longing for the dark
Quietly I give in–quietly I let the darkness consume me
Then suddenly I am there once again
There in that place that knows no sadness
Longing to stay, yet so quickly pulled back to reality
cold and lonely
I’m between this world and the next
eyes fluttering, longing for the dark

ok! One more!

waiting
drip drop, drip drop
waiting
I can feel the air on my face
waiting
The hands of time move so slowly
waiting
waiting, and waiting, and waiting some more
my thoughts drift far away
waiting
the earth moves around the sun
waiting
my body ages, my body slows
waiting
my body stops
I am waiting no longer

OK, so I know I’ve posted a lot of poetry, what can I say? I’m in that sort of mood recently